Yeah, the talent's there
It's good, I agree, I like the talent that you have for making various melodies, and the drumtrack was quite good considering the genre of the music. However, I'm going to supply a bit of constructive criticism, because I'd want to see more from you, which I can imagine would be very good. This genre is at a halfway point, the prominent side showing as trance. I believe that you should look into trance music. Try learning about sweeps, synthesized instruments, and pads to fill out the background that is there in your music. Also, I know what studio you're using and what most of the instruments are, and that's not something you would want, you need to produce so many layers that the music cannot be identified by any of its listeners. Please keep producing, I'm looking forward to anything you produce in the future if you heed my advice :)